Feedback of Final PA from Younger Target audiences (16+)
"i loved it, you guys really pulled it off
i had to watch it again cause i thought wait that cant be luke
its like a little mini-movie in its self .... although you couldnt tell that he had a tumor seemed more like a headache
it was great :D
were you and jemma like the devil and angel one trying to get him to spend his money and the other telling him to save it ?"
"i loved it, you guys really pulled it off
i had to watch it again cause i thought wait that cant be luke
its like a little mini-movie in its self .... although you couldnt tell that he had a tumor seemed more like a headache
it was great :D
were you and jemma like the devil and angel one trying to get him to spend his money and the other telling him to save it ?"
"I thought it was very good. I loved the two Devil and Angel characters, and the way you can definately tell who they were from the costume and the...gestures, yeah the gestures they make. Oh, I didn't really understand the storyline though."
"yes sonia the baddy!!!
i love the whole story board -- but its probably the background scene (and maybe at the beginning, you would see the players already sitting down instead of them walking to their seat) -- when the guys head is hurting as well --- ask if he could do it a bit more naturally (sorry but looked kind of fake)
i love the angel and devil at the end
hope it helps :)"
i love the whole story board -- but its probably the background scene (and maybe at the beginning, you would see the players already sitting down instead of them walking to their seat) -- when the guys head is hurting as well --- ask if he could do it a bit more naturally (sorry but looked kind of fake)
i love the angel and devil at the end
hope it helps :)"
"It was fabulous. I really liked the soundtrack and the like different camera angles and everything. It all looked really good. I liked all of the close ups of like you guys and the table and everything. It was all great."
"I really liked the video. I wish it could be created as a full length movie because the small clip was great. It did have a brilliant look and feel to it but I think that the blurry bit at the beginning when they all go to the table could have been improved. However I think without the effect the scene wouldn't have looked right. Also, I think the order of the angel and devil bit is wrong - the angel should have come on first so the guy could then see the devil and go with the devil. But overall the video was awesome."
From Older Target Audience (30+)
(From msn convo)
This was amazing!
Karl thought it was amazing I really liked it
The color and b/w contrasts are super, your script proves that you can really tell a story in 2 minutes
camera cool, set cool, clothes and make up coolio!
Here' the one comment from both of us
This refers to "Michael Caine on acting" - try find his video or look it up...
if you want to be great DON'T BLINK - especially in the close up
if you watch Meryl and the rest of them they hold still even 'till the tears come
it's far more powerful and commanding
again just a comment and observation!
"I" - Amateur Film Maker, Film Lover.
"Karl" - Camera Man, Film Lover.
Karl thought it was amazing I really liked it
The color and b/w contrasts are super, your script proves that you can really tell a story in 2 minutes
camera cool, set cool, clothes and make up coolio!
Here' the one comment from both of us
This refers to "Michael Caine on acting" - try find his video or look it up...
if you want to be great DON'T BLINK - especially in the close up
if you watch Meryl and the rest of them they hold still even 'till the tears come
it's far more powerful and commanding
again just a comment and observation!
"I" - Amateur Film Maker, Film Lover.
"Karl" - Camera Man, Film Lover.
Video Summary:
- Logical and realistic
- Actors need to be older - have more of a gambler look
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